ravelover17

Oh the tears are falling

I’m so sick of anyone calling Peter human. He’s obviously completely different, down to a cellular level. His blood is kryptonian even if krypton doesn’t exist here.

Venom!

Because, like the police, they only get called *after* something happened. Honestly the Naruto world needs better use of phones or radios.

Considering how fire follows it’s fuel (oxygen in this case) pretty sure Fijian could just turn it back on Orochi-Baka

Really too little actual story or conversation , the explanation of societal things has been way excessive

Weird cliffhanger

Thanks for the critique orochimaru-Sama! Now…it should be time for you to leave , no?

Finally someone he can talk to in his territory

Y’all comments are ridiculous . It’s not even really a cliffhanger, it’s just that fights often take multiple chapters, and this was a set up chapter for the fight.