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Thank you for your review. Will make the chapters longer for sure.
Well, it's tradition to give yourself 5 stars. Anyway I've uploaded all the written chapters. New chapters publishing will be dependent on my mood mostly, but you can expect 3 to 5 chapters weekly. Hope you'll enjoy and let me know if there are any issues. Cheers.
Mate, you have issues. You did not like the author/fiction? Write your comment about what it is you like/dislike give 1-5 stars and go. Leave this fiction and readers alone. Good luck.
Writing quality is perfect. I really do like how it goes. MC is a smart one not a naive idiot like most of the MCU fictions. He has 3 step process for ppl who like to stir trouble and i loved it. Not a psychopaths killing left and right. Good work author-san best of luck.
Maybe because half of the chapters are fillers. It took you 52 chapters to give him bending. After that your 2 other chapters are pure fillers again. It would've took you 4 paragraphs to say that bounty hunters were searching for some bloodline which was recorded there and got caught by Azula. Instead you kept it as a chapter, and after that you decided to add another filler where all he did was sit on a ostrich and contemplate. I do like your writing, yet its really tiring. I'm dropping this and will keep it in library to check in 6 months to 1 year time. Good luck to you.
Stupidity must be hereditary with your bloodline to make you write gibberish and label it something important in your deluded mind. FYI this is internet. I really do not fckng care about your ideas, beliefs or personality. For all i care you can die at this moment and nothing will change for me. Wish you a happy life and some braincells.
Thank you for the heads-up. Those 3 are the most hated characters to my taste. Especially granger and weaslett.
Control freak, keeps list of weaknesses of his allies and enemies as a precaution. Did I mention control freak. Plays dirty when needed. What's the difference between him and any hydra head ? As a summary he a spy master. Shield is no different from hydra or red room. Only polished to make it seem a bit more on morally positive side.
Title should've been the strongest SIMP. the way he simps after granger is disgusting and pedophilic. Students of Slytherin simply accept his simping over chang and granger with no issues is extremely unlikely. overall choosing the bush haired sl*t over any other girl with wizard background is idiotic.
Hero and an idiotic one at that.