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Usiel

Usiel

Lv13
2021-04-19 入りましたGlobal
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38.1h

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  • Usiel
    Usiel4 days ago
    に返信 kaio_resende

    Thank you for your review. Will make the chapters longer for sure.

  • Usiel
    Usiel13 days ago
    発表

    Well, it's tradition to give yourself 5 stars. Anyway I've uploaded all the written chapters. New chapters publishing will be dependent on my mood mostly, but you can expect 3 to 5 chapters weekly. Hope you'll enjoy and let me know if there are any issues. Cheers.

  • Usiel
    Usiel20 days ago
    に返信 Obvlion

    Mate, you have issues. You did not like the author/fiction? Write your comment about what it is you like/dislike give 1-5 stars and go. Leave this fiction and readers alone. Good luck.

  • Usiel
    Usiel20 days ago
    発表

    Writing quality is perfect. I really do like how it goes. MC is a smart one not a naive idiot like most of the MCU fictions. He has 3 step process for ppl who like to stir trouble and i loved it. Not a psychopaths killing left and right. Good work author-san best of luck.

  • Usiel
    Usiel25 days ago
    に返信 PcaNovels

    Maybe because half of the chapters are fillers. It took you 52 chapters to give him bending. After that your 2 other chapters are pure fillers again. It would've took you 4 paragraphs to say that bounty hunters were searching for some bloodline which was recorded there and got caught by Azula. Instead you kept it as a chapter, and after that you decided to add another filler where all he did was sit on a ostrich and contemplate. I do like your writing, yet its really tiring. I'm dropping this and will keep it in library to check in 6 months to 1 year time. Good luck to you.

  • Usiel
    Usiela month ago
    に返信 Queen_Karina

    Stupidity must be hereditary with your bloodline to make you write gibberish and label it something important in your deluded mind. FYI this is internet. I really do not fckng care about your ideas, beliefs or personality. For all i care you can die at this moment and nothing will change for me. Wish you a happy life and some braincells.

  • Usiel
    Usiela month ago
    に返信 Mysteryon

    Thank you for the heads-up. Those 3 are the most hated characters to my taste. Especially granger and weaslett.

  • Usiel
    Usiela month ago
    に返信 Queen_Karina

    Control freak, keeps list of weaknesses of his allies and enemies as a precaution. Did I mention control freak. Plays dirty when needed. What's the difference between him and any hydra head ? As a summary he a spy master. Shield is no different from hydra or red room. Only polished to make it seem a bit more on morally positive side.

  • Usiel
    Usiela month ago
    発表

    Title should've been the strongest SIMP. the way he simps after granger is disgusting and pedophilic. Students of Slytherin simply accept his simping over chang and granger with no issues is extremely unlikely. overall choosing the bush haired sl*t over any other girl with wizard background is idiotic.

  • Usiel
    Usiela month ago
    に返信 DaoistjQtMkq

    Hero and an idiotic one at that.

A Wheel of Time Fanfiction : Heir of the Shadow

In a world bound by the Wheel of Time, where the Light and Shadow wage an eternal war, one man stands apart Naravoss, the secret son of Lews Therin Telamon and the Forsaken Lanfear. Born of forbidden bloodlines and abandoned to fate, Naravoss rises as a force of darkness, his allegiance sworn to the Shadow and his ambition driven by a singular purpose: to kill Lews Therin’s reborn soul and free the Dark One. Freed from the taint of Saidin by a twist of fate during the Dark One’s sealing, Naravoss wields untainted power with the clarity of a storm. His mastery over the One Power, coupled with his cunning, sets him on a path to dominate nations, infiltrate ancient prophecies, and gather artifacts of immense power. From the courts of Andor to the Stone of Tear, his shadow spreads across the world. While Moiraine Sedai and the forces of Light seek the Dragon Reborn in the secluded village of the Two Rivers, Naravoss plots to unravel the fragile balance of the Pattern. But even the Shadow is not without rivals. With Forsaken freed to challenge his claim to power and the threads of prophecy tightening around him, Naravoss must outmaneuver enemies from both Light and Shadow. Will the Heir of the Shadow succeed in remaking the world in darkness, or will his own ambition lead to his downfall? In a tale of betrayal, forbidden origins, and the eternal war between Light and Shadow, witness the rise of a man determined to rewrite the destiny woven by the Wheel.

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