steffanpotro

Honestly, just for the NSFW chapter alone I'd rate this a 5 star novel. Unlike most of the garbage 'smut' on this site, that is just 3 paragraphs of boring, non-descript penetration, without any foreplay or feeling in general, this actually reads like an off the shelf erotica. Some very solid smut. But yeah, the rest of the novel: Grammar is perfect, I think I only saw a few spelling mistakes over 13 chapter. Updates are also stable and I hope it stays that way. Story is too slow. Character Design is part of the story problem. The MC isn't weak, but normal. That means he does not fight bandits and horned rabbits in the first chapter and bathes in their blood to acquire power, nor does he have the strength to do so in the first place. So the main character has to find other ways to level and that is taking a long, long time. World Background is normal Naruto, so yay.

The fight was a bit too short imo. Still good.

Brilliant mat.e