Alexx_Sejas

Recommended, a peculiar story. It may not attract much attention at first, but then as the story progresses it becomes quite entertaining. 🫡🫡

I read a couple of chapters, the idea is good. The story has very little background and important details (almost no details) so it is annoying to read and that is why the chapters are somewhat short. It is a story in which you have to ignore many gaps to continue reading.

Just because you are strong you won't be promoted to chunnin (keep in mind that they are like mini squad leaders), and if that were the case I would have had to promote Neji in the original work (the greatest genius of the hyugas). . But apart from being strong, many points are taken into account, such as the ninja mentality, which is essential.

Could it be that Fujin demonstrates in this Arc that he was able to learn the flying thunder god jutsu during the invasion? Or will you keep it as a hole card? Likewise, it will be a very good event to gain influence in a power base.

The truth is that I read until chapter 58, the story doesn't bother me that it's slow, but I'm surprised that until this chapter they still haven't solved so many gaps or gaps in the previous chapters. I missed a lot more background and details in the first chapters, for example his early graduation or his relationship with secondary characters. I ignored some things to continue reading but I realized that this is a fic with nice words "to pass the time"

The work is good, it was well developed and was reaching very good condition. But from chapter 48 something changes that was super unnecessary, this error made me want to stop reading it. The story had a lot of potential, and since the author did not correct that error, this must be a translation and not an original.

The truth is that the first chapter is not the best. but I continued reading the following chapters and they are quite good, so far the story and the protagonist have a good development. Taking out the first chapter, this fic is recommended.

There were 5 wishes. -Lineage -Devil Fruit -Immunity to water (that is completely separate and unnecessary, you already have your lineage, you can use the excuse that with this you have greater resistance and tolerance towards water but you also have no immunity) -The three hakis - Know how to handle the sword. The truth is that I didn't like the first chapter.