remove the comma man.

when the next chap dude!?

it's supposed to be three.

it's supposed to be three

astrid is mean

Great Cover Elyon!

used to the daily cliffhangers now.

Im really curious as to what will emerge when William grants divinity to the Millennial beast or the "Rolling"Demi-god.

great cliffhanger. wonder what'll happen to hellan kingdom and noah. So, at least we know william is not going to be the hero this time. Hey author, is Ella's new form due to the bell? Please do tell if it doesn't spoil future story.

Congrats on 300!

Great to see someone with similar taste in Profile pictures. [img=recommend]I have had the same profile picture as yours for my study account.

That would be an ideal plot-development that i would have written.

I think that the elves are the worst species in the novel. Demons are far better than them. Elves Lost a war to William's Dad, asked their priestess to seduce him, convince him to sacrifice himself for saving their world tree which gives them powers, and attacking his nation while he is unconsciously powering them greatly to destroy his own nation. They even send a spy-cum-assassin to monitor and kill if necessary their priestess and savior's son.

it will be nice to see ella taking her celestial form,entering william's sea of consciousness and healing him to full recovery.And after he wakes up, he fights all the invading humans with his army and hellan kingdom and unleashing The "Rolling" Demi-god on the demi-god's "Beloved" Elves.

lovely story, lovely writing. awaiting further chapters.

Hah........you dont mention the name in the chapter but mention it in the title!?

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Bitxh points?

Man Of Culture!

Appreciate the long chapter