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Such a good book perfect writing and fluent grammar a golden book i would say 10/10....................................................................................................................................

Such a golden bok nice plot and almost perfect grammar this book is so good i hope you write more chapter i cant wait to read more..........................................

The last part of chapter 2 Just leave it to your imagination of what happened haha

A good novel not my type but it has agood plot also god charter building and a few grammital error over all its ok actually but hope you make more chapters.

I realy gold novel it was fun to read also it has good plot and an intiristing story line it has also good grammar and writing style i would say 9/10 i good novel hope you update more

For real the chapters are to short don't ublish if not 1k words but it has an intiristing story it has a good plot also its a bit fast paced but overall its ok i would say 6/10 I hope you improve and work hard also it has a few grammatical error but you can always change that so yeah.

An interisting novel and nice plot i cant review well because it has only 3 chapter but i think this will be good in the future als i hope to have more chapters.

suuch a fire book cant wait for more good plot fire chapter 1 to 2 i hope for more chapter cause it realy was good i reccomend this book!! i hope others would enjoy reading................................ lez go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Suck star novel good grammar and good plot i hope for more but i think make mre chapters hahahahaahhhahahahaahahhahahahahahhahahaahahahahahahahahaa

God novel als pls dont put those thngs at the beggining it was hard to read aslo update and i hope this novel goes well 7/10 good work author