PLZ atleast upload them once or twice a week

Do u have the raw link?

Can you please share the raw link or raw name . Absolutely superb one will still have to vist u though for translation.lmao..........,...............

Provided the link

Translated shit . If you translate atleast provide the original link.please do mention the source or clarify about it before. https://www.69shuba.com/book/48180.htm?t=2023

Wow h Great 😁😁😁 support u writer I don't have much to say even though I wnat to say too much

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Trash trash Chinese fucking trash so not read it waste of time so called Chinese supermacy. Fucking waste of time. Do not waste ur time just read first paid CHP and u will know

Too much unnecessary info dump . Put info at the bottom. Don't add Italian ,asian or etc other name just create some by yourself it will be good.your chapter flow to slow with too much redundant content PLZ work on this . Btw good idea keep working. character development not good . If you improve in will change the rating accordingly.

Fantastic writing till now, no major or troubling grammatical mistakes found. Nice plot. Hope the author atleast completes the novel.olz don't drop it midway after reading many dalulau fanfiction this is the best i have seen till now. God bless the author may he continue to write and succeed in his/her endeavours .☺️☺️🤗

Author can you please remove lord Krishna name, resemblance connection to it.The idea you are applying is putting a very weng image on lord Krishna please have your facts checked. The idea is offence to many. I suggest you try adding hypothetical background plz.😊 Btw nice novel

Good going nicely done and presented. Author you should try writting more and increase your skill. Someday in the future you might be able to write your very own book.

Good going loving it till now one of the absolute best ho fanfic I found on this site.Loved till the last updated chapter pl start posting vol 2 eager to read it.

Good going can u plz keep the updates to 1 per day loving your grammer and writing style. Keep the current work ur have great writing quality after this work completes try writing a book on your own it would help u lot in future.,..........................

One of the best gp fabric i found on webnovel with no nosense no shit it is just good . Also good work with the grammer didn't find many so far till chp 52 .expect more better work .

Fucked up piece of shit waste of time the qa is fucked up it incutes conflict and the writing style show the shadow of moronic Chinese youth writer from the way it is written we may soon find it reaching absoluete nonsesense 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮

Shit don't read this bastards creating light novel sites into fucking porn sites.bastard hope his mother and all family is fucked infront of him . absolutely hate the author for this moronic posting.

Good work keep up 👍👍

Where is 2nd CHP ?

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