Four characters must be Dave

That scene was a bit cliche. I guess he is going down the loved by luck route.

Well that's something that is rarely shown in novels thanks for answering.

If he hit him in precious areas would he get a critical hit? I'm sure most people get what i mean

But if he couldn't hear why did he nod at her from her words. Could he actually hear her?

Thx for the chapter

I'm pretty sure Ater is more into rey than any 'lesser being' that may be in this world maybe he should be added to the list of potential romance interests. It fits too with the praise and belly rubs along with his arguement with the other familiar

Most likely using an illusion like he did back at the battle in the capital. Unless they are high s rank entities like ater they probably can't detect his higher form of magic

Oh an encounter with a main character. I'm sure nothing wrong will happen that will catch their eye making them curious about the former nobles djin like personality

By level 20+ he should have maxed out his domination class if he allocated all his skill points. Shouldn't it put him at the same point as someone who had to manually train all their skills for their entire career. useful

I wonder if that's good or bad for his level. Maybe it will balance itself as he gains more classes since he may get boosts to specific stats per class he gains

The writing really lets it down to such a point where it is hard to read and a bit cringe in certain areas. The use of Evan for every time he does something instead of another words for it like he, him, they upon the other creative ways a 3rd person character can be described. My main issue is the Engrish that the novel uses and yes that is not a spelling mistake i wrote Engrish not English. It would have been fine if there was a disclaimer saying that it's not their first language but when people point it out it still isn't sorted in the chapter I'm reading the sentence Evan uses is " I want to sale a ice troll body" That's a small thing instead of sell it says sale but other times it can be entire sentences and it's so common it ruins the reading experience.

Maybe it's a person who read his story like the being did and knows his story. Either way he could gain a co-conspirator.

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So instead of being a villainess she is Liam's main love interest. I'm guessing by his reaction it didn't happen last time he read about it.

Maybe he could use guns for long range and daggers and karambits for close range. Of he could use his perception from his eyes to coat the mechanism in aura he would be able to kill people easily and it would be a nice surprise since people use bows and things.

Shouldn't his last name be removed as he is disowned or does the name stay but he can't use it

Xavier had sat

That's 11.4 years of wandering. What sort of mental fortitude does he have for that!!!

Maybe he can save her in this timeline at least for some peace of mind. It's nice to see his morals weren't all gone in his old life. Although i guess he was fighting for the people in his own way