Frosty_Mo

All in all I enjoyed the read. Still catching up with most recent chapters but from what I see this series has a lot of potential. I’m particularly interested in the world building!

Shameless review on author behalf. Aware of my shortcomings in raw literature and will continue to improve.

Sounds like something I’d do

OI! I know stuff happens but this story is an absolute masterpiece in the making bro! Can't wait to see chapter 49 one of these days. I'll be waiting!

I've only gotten a bit into chapter two but it seems to be a well designed series. The design detail and multitude of different locations mentioned makes it seem like you've take a lot of time designing the world. Good job, I like the writing.

I like the mysterious vibe to it. The way Zane doesn't react to much makes him seem a little separated from the other side characters which could be good or bad.

Agreed

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Thanks, much appreciated

Wow, that was very deep. I honestly like the interesting take on the subject and think this story could be quite interesting.