An_Unknown_Writer

Fic is fiction

It was kinda enjoyable but ruined by all the metaphorical stuff that filled every single chapter.

Than I suggest you go and re-edit the starting chapters as it makes it hard to get into the story 🤷

Writing quality 1-star Hard to read and has 700 word chapters. Updating stability 1-star The story is dropped Story development 2-Star The main character is strong from the start so there is not really any good story to develop Character design 3-Star Acts similar to Gojo but as mentioned before he is strong from the start causing the reader to not see his growth causing a lack of care for the character World background 4-star It’s Danmachi but a little messed up

I tried to enjoy it and give it a chance but as I kept reading I just couldn’t find anything to enjoy as it just felt kind of boring and things being drawn out.

This is garbage not a single likable thing about mc he’s a crybaby who you would think is 6 years old

This is unedited MTL if you do not want your brain to turn to mush don’t bother reading.

This is unenjoyable I can not think about a single positive thing about this novel. I would rather see his sister become the main character than the current trash one. 5 star update stability 1 star everything else.

How is it a level of 20 gloom?

Good up until a little after chapter 150. It got really boring and felt like everything was drawn out and it made me start skipping chapters until I just gave up