illiterate author burnt his very last brain cell crapping out this awful, lackluster, joke of a 'novel'. This is more of a regurgitation of random English words than a story. I would say I wonder how the author has so little shame to display this proudly, but I am pretty sure it isn't even intelligent enough to process such an emotion. Such a pitiful life, being born so supremely stupid.

Don't bother translating a book from a language you don't understand to another language you also don't understand doofus -----------------------------------

Gonna make it a routine to leave a 1 star comment everyday lmfao ur a reject

Non existent grammar ———————————————————-

"p-p-pwese bwe nice to me Q_Q" be fr bro

Webnovel author try not to be as cringe as possible challenge (level: impossible)

bro is just racist

It's fine, but the dialogue is very cringy and unrealistic at times ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------

sigh.

Calm the hell down. All of his points were valid criticisms and he wasn't even rude about it? Did you seriously think you would only ever hear positive shit when you started writing this story? That your work is so perfect and has no flaws and anyone who offers criticism on it is stupid and doesn't know what they are talking about? Your story is nowhere near perfect and you are C tier author AT BEST. Otherwise, you wouldn't be posting on this shitty site. In addition, you, under no circumstances, need to have the ability to do something to critique it. Look at literally any sports analyst or similar job. This response reeks of insecurity. The only one throwing a tantrum here is you, you pathetic wannabe. Lmao, the audacity to claim he could never produce stuff nearly as good as yours while spelling so much wrong in that response is laughable. Work on yourself bro, this sort of reaction is not normal.

+1

All of the dialogue in this work is rushed and inorganic

+1

+1000

Is this gonna be harem now or what?

Didn’t need to be in caps, very juvenile

somehow got even worse

disgusting

It's ok I guess. The premise is exciting, but the story overall is just kinda meh. It is pretty edgy and the character interactions don't feel natural at all. In addition like 60% of the sentences are incomplete and the author uses periods where they should be using commas. Makes the story read in a very jarring manner and the story itself wasn't good enough for me to look past that. Has potential though I guess.

premise was good, but this was formatted in such a way that it was a chore to read