Hellifrit

Aside from the grammatical errors, I genuinely like this story. The characters are believable and it's a nice change of pace from all the system stories.

Interesting premise, just that I think the overall writing could use some work for an easier time to read. The characters aren't bad and the world is quite interesting. Keep up the good work and I will read it again some day.

I thought this will be another teen romance that caters around desperate teenagers, but color me surprised that it is that but more. The character have good conflicts and the chemistry is well done. The addition of action scenes keeps me going so that is a good bonus. I look forward to see where will this story go .

This is a very solid story. I've been reading 2 to 3 chapters and I get the feeling of the series being a tournament story. I don't mind it and the magic system in story is well made. My verdict, an easy 5 star.

An easy 5 star for me about this story. From the first three chapters there are good direction and foreshadowing for us audience to look forward to. Plus the backstory helps the readers to understand the situation better. Character wise, it's not the most expressive but I wouldn't mind it since it still get the message across. Other than that, the author is doing good job to bring enjoyment to their audience. Keep up the good work.

Storywise, this book is not bad at all. The addition of Chinese actually made me like it a lot, not many adds Chinese in their book after all. Writing wise, from what I can tell the author is still figuring out the formating style of Inkstone so I can't blame them. However, paragraph breaking is not the best at all and makes me feel like reading a wall of text. Other than this complain, I don't have much to say. The story itself is almost like any other transmigration story, but I don't mind it since that's what it's trying to go for anyway. With that said, I'll say keep up the good work author.

The review I'm about to give is opinion based. If some are your intentions then take this as a grain of salt. For three chapters, it certainly got me hooked into the story. I like what the premise is all about and the way you written the loss of love is good. However, the beginning of the story got me a little confused at first but I eventually understand. Grammar wise, it's not bad but there are one or two sentences requires me to read twice to understand. Otherwise , it's good. For characterization, Satin is not bad of a character and I want to know more about her. I want to know her struggles and what happened to lead her life into this. Other than that, the others are bare basic but will suffice. Finally, the world building. I'll be honest, it's almost as if nonsensical in the sense that I'm looking into the world of Alice in the Wonderland. A tread house, a donut house, it feels a bit nuts but I kinda like it. Overall, for three chapters this is a good book and worth to read. I'll revisit this book once more chapters are released and when I got the time. Keep up the good work author.

Perfection, that is what I can describe this book as. The system and everything about this world is well done, and the characters are well realized. The beginning is blood pumping and great, giving us the proper motivation to Red's adventure. Grammar and composition are also great since I barely see any errors at all. Overall, like I said, this is perfect and I like it. Keep up the good work author!

After reading 7 chapters, I would say that this is potentially one of the stories that can compete some of the titans in this site. The plot is intriguing and the characters are fun to read. I know I have more chapters to read so my opinion might bound to change, but in these 7 chapters I would say this is good. Keep up the good work!

I read the first 4 chapters and I have to say, this gives me the Harry Potter vibe. Stepping into a magical world and feeling alive, that's the kind of feeling I have while reading this. The characterization is good too, and I want to see more of the characters. As for criticism, I can't say much but I feel that the world is almost like any other books about real world with supernatural side of things. It's not bad at all since you have your own twist. With that said, good job and keep up the good work dear author.