Purpl3_Noodle
I'm learning how to write.
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The story is a little slow, and the descriptions are somewhat lacking, BUT, for a first novel this is great! The writing is amazing with almost no errors, and it's fluent and smooth to read. The story does feel slow, but with some tweaking could be really good. I'm excited to see this author grow. Good luck! [img=recommend]
HAHA! The story may have started a little slow and confusing. But I read just a little longer and was pleasantly surprised. The punchiness, humor, and action mixed together make this a great novel. It is honestly succeeds at swaying your emotions and reactions, which I cannot say for many novels. Keep up the stupendous writing!!!!