ratty_islandr

See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

Hello Author! Got some questions for ya. Are the characters going to be the same age throughout the story? Or will they get older? Thnx in advance.

Push ups ez… sit ups? Nah

Keep in mind that most would be asleep

You got me

You’ll see lol

I’ll keep my mouth shut now

If he was in mcs dream he must’ve saw him running away no? Is he not questioning that or not mentioning it intentionally?

I am very interested in the story and I would love to read this… But the grammar is messing with my mind. I read up to 20 chapters and I think Author adds too many commas, even in places where periods should be. That makes a lot of difference for me as a reader. I’m not a professional but I’ve been reading for a while now so I can see some mistakes. I will leave this in my will read folders and come back later to see if you have hopefully edited or have gotten an editor.. This is just my opinion so guys go easy on me.

Didn’t it mention that you gain lifespan by reaching Legendary?