Aboode

A good read, although the MC become too powerful very quickly and sometimes you don’t feel that there is any direction that the story go to.

3D2Y

The frustrating thing is there are five star reviews with nothing but emojis and people come to call my review bias.

Reviews are naturally biased, and I didn't drop by your comment or review to tell you to leave. Show some respect.

After I pointed out the missing tag in my review, the author added it. You can check the dates and see for yourself. Then the author posted a review criticizing readers for not checking the tag. Now people are coming to my review, accusing me of misleading them.

Misleading? The heroic tag wasn’t even there before—check my comment and see the author’s response. He added the tag after I pointed it out, so don’t accuse me of misleading anyone. This is my review; if you don’t like it, that’s your problem.

Dude, you are contradicting yourself. You literally gave the story ”In One Piece With The Barrier Fruit” One star review so what make your review more valid than anyone else?

I appreciate your reply, but I stand by my points. The title can mislead readers, and while tags help, sometimes authors don’t include all the appropriate tags, such as a good alignment tag and other time people don’t read the tags. Regarding the MC exposing himself early on, it’s fine if you like that, but I prefer more character development before such reveals. It makes the story richer in my view. For example, when he flies around looking for a place to train and conveniently comes across a crime with someone screaming for help, it felt forced to me. The timing was too perfect and disrupted the flow of the narrative. His interference exposed him to other superheroes and supervillains, which could cause problems, especially since he didn’t fully control his powers yet. The Superman comparison wasn’t meant to bash the MC but to highlight similarities that felt unoriginal to me. Yes, he might kill villains, but the overall vibe still feels like a Superman wannabe. I get that not everyone will see the plot as forced, but for me, it had moments that felt unnatural or too convenient.

Thank you for the chapter and A great start for the story except I don’t like that He has a store it may make the story a bit too fantastical not in a good way I would recommend taking it out from the story please consider it. Ps. I hope the story doesn’t become full of drama.