EnderGolem997

It's going to be fixed in the Revised version

Perhaps...

Hey, thanks for the review. I saw your comments, and I will admit, when I first began this story, I did rush into it and not give it proper, gradual development at first. I skipped around because I wanted to rush into the action, and as the saying goes, "Only fools rush in." Anyways, thanks for giving it a read, and I hope any novel I make in the future impresses you then!

Thank you. I really appreciate it. Writing does take time. Eventually, stories end and begin, and the time it takes in-between tend to be the most beautiful moments. I will do my best

Hey, Ven. Yeah, it has been a while. (Shame on my part.) I have good news; my graduation is pretty close, and I have one final academic stretch before Im finally free from the grand education system. The stuff I'm learning is also pretty cool, so it can be applied to my writing as well. Those are the little positives I try to find amidst a lot of work. I've been feeling better by the way. I have been more active and engaging in my immediate life; so it doesn't feel like my brain is overloaded or dying. You can see Ethan understand that, but not fully apply it to himself. Also, Im working on the new arc. I shall be honest, the next chapter might drop in a month

Got to hop on that grind again if so

I don't know what that is

Like, finish the story, end it, or drop the story, end it? Or are you telling me to off myself? Spam doesn't convey a lot of detail

Nah, Ein, that's just property tax, my guy. Any adult would know, unless they're a renter, which a lot are these days