Yuki_55

it’s all gud, I’m not trying to criticise your work… I’m just pointing out things that don’t feel(?) right in my opinion.

look, I don’t care how close you are to your sister/brother, they won’t react like this… I know I won’t and I know my 2 sisters won’t either. Maybe it just me, but I find this hella cringe.

ty for chapter

well… at least you didn’t make up some bullahit excuse. Ty for the chapters so far and gl man.

yep, knew it… he should be star level

I feel like he should be stronger then tire 6… aren’t souls characters using conceptual powers and shit? idk, maybe I’m just tripping

Really well made FF, the writing quality is definitely one of the best in the FF category. It feels like… well, an actual book unlike the other brainrot english that’s on this app. Good OC, honestly surprised at how well you made Acheron fit in the [Date A Live] world. I will be honest thou, upload is kinda slow… but the writing quality makes up for it. (I’d rather have slow uploads with good writing then brainrot everyday) +No Harem Overall I give you a cooki for you good work, ty.