A really good story 10/10. An MC Kaidou always seemed like a good idea to me, and you executed it masterfully. I just wish Kaidou had actually convinced Yamato to join him, without brainwashing. Oden was an idiot who left the country in the hands of pirates to live a dream even after knowing what they did to the residents, his father and his wife, in addition to knowing who Orochi really is. He was a bad leader, very naive and by placing his own desire for adventure above his responsibility to his country, he brought about its downfall and eventually his own death. It was possible to convince Yamato that Oden was not someone to be admired.

Overall I liked the story, I'm looking forward to chapter 16 for the big reveal that Jiram is a villain.

The story is good but I think the protagonist became too strong in too little time, how will a story have any interesting conflict if the protagonist just snaps his finger and that's it, problem solved.

I really like the story, the only thing that bothers me is the recent harem forming. I know it was in the Tags from the beginning but I ignored it due to the quality of the story.

This story has great potential to be one of the best MHA stories. 5 stars ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Rikke é uma das minhas personagens favoritas de Skyrim por favor não mate ela Autor.

But I don't think she would make a good High Queen.

Poor Elisif, many people don't like her. But I think she has the potential to be a good jarl after the Civil War.

Good chapter. Balgruuf is by far the best Jarl in my opinion. I hope he can become high king in this fic.

excellent chapter. With Skald dead, will Brina become Jarl? Causing Ulfric to lose an allied province?

who would say

great chapter

I was feeling this coming but... Dragonborn Stormcloack seriously?