Started out decently but MC’s cheat suddenly turned into a simulator. Don’t really like this direction as I liked the initial start of the cheat. Rip.

She probably addressed him in a way that calls him a student but it wasnt translated well

Holy shit, i havent seen a novel of such quality on WN in years. The translation only has an occasional misgender about every 5 chapters, and the story is intersting to boot! The comedy also happens to make some semblance of sense. If this gets dropped, I’m about to become the next Grandmist sage!

Bro is the kind of guy who doesn’t like an anime or novel because nobody dies in the first chapter/episode. It doesn’t need an interesting deep secret of the world to be an interesting novel. I don’t think you’ve ever heard of a romance or slice of life genre in your life.

First time i’ve given a novel all 5s in trial read. The only way the author could possibly screw this up is if he makes it a harem or doesn’t have MC get together with the main girl. An easygoing comedy slice of life.

If you want face slapping, there are tons out there. This is an easy-going comedy slice of life. Calm down.

Tf is that?

Oh wait, i thought she knew he was reading it

Probably the meaning of MC’s name

Well, its more like how you can feel killing intent and people staring at you in novels, but not in real life. He is detecting malice, just like how mcs detect killing intent.

A decent story if the author stuck to what he was good at. He attempts to introduce a love interest, which is good. It works somewhat well, which is good. Until he fucked it up. Instead of naturally progressing the characters together, an elder basically asks them if they wanna get married. Terrible way to develop a romantic subplot. I get you wanted MC to have a wife, but you didn’t have to be so low effort about it. They get somewhat close quite quickly, despite only meeting on about 5 separate occasions. The large time skips between their meetings does not give the impression that they are very passionate about each other. Their development could have been handled significantly better, but instead the author decided to smash two characters who only met a few times together. I can’t take how fast she refers to MC affectionately after just getting married. Like bro, you only met like 5 times. Terrible development on author’s part.

Well you see, when you’re regularly consuming trash, a moldy piece of bread is better than that. Low quality trial reads = better reaction to half decent trial reads

As always, WN seems to always be able to fuck up a decent story. Translations fall off after chapter 40, as always. However, im pretty sure this story has been adapted into a manhua. Maybe the translations will be better there. Story is decent, nice premise, but goddamn WN’s mtl is ruthless.

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I think the main point is teasing you with the big reveal. If you stuck with “I’m actually a cultivation bigshot”, you would feel pretty good with the final reveal.

Shit man. WN tends to do this, translating with real humans for the trial of 40 chaps, and then switching to MTL with little to no editing past that. Idk if its a budget cut or smth, but it really turns people off the novel. A shame to see a decent novel get buried.

Honestly, its a good concept and scenario, but the author seems subpar. I’m not really invested in these characters much, to which i blame the author’s poor writing skill, but i must say the author had a good idea with this concept.

He never needed 100% before advancing. It was his choice to go to 100

Pill poison wont exist in every novel

If you come into it with a nitpicking mindset, you will find things that aren’t even there. Theres clearly something larger behind that slain monster, as it said be was only a small fry.