Racquel_Mcdonough

Thanks for this. I won't even bother waste my time even with it being a 24 hour free read. I am just going to watch and see WN brings it up as a 24 hour free week twice in the same week or twice in less than 7 days. I so tired of these plots

Good grief this FL is annoying the heck out of me. I dislike when authors make their leads so immature. I get it if she is 18 but 20 going into 21 is no longer a child to be this immature it's suppose to be cute be it's not cute.

Thank you. I appreciate review that helps us better understand the plot and I'm with you. These repetitive plots are tiring and waste of money. It's like you read one you've read all. You have help me to make up my mind on reading it or not.

wait a minute she didn't know his first name and still didn't check her marriage certificate to see his full name all this time? Girl you could be married to a serial killer and don't mind lol

So this is where my reading ends so I will leave a comment here rather than a review since I hope it has a good end and I rather leave a glorious review but I can not for probably my own person taste in plots. I can't feel sympathy for the FL. She approached the ML knowing is circumstances just to save her family and she doesn't even like him a bit, understandable. the ML seem to be doing everything and making all the decision while she just waits around to be kidnapped or drugged. Apparently being battered after being kidnapped wasn't enough to give her some self perseverance to not go walking dark streets at night. I haven't seen where she has done anything to make me feel she is a strong FL but more like a damsel in distress up to this point. The ML just seems to be thrown in to move the plot along and I guess his behavior is to show that he is a arrogant CEO type but it fell flat for me. I'm not even sure anymore what kind of novel it's suppose to be. slow burn romance, distrust anti love romance, drama? Trust no man in love but go on date with them even when you're supposedly engaged without letting them know knowing they have some feels for you and how did he miss knowing when it seems everyone plus the media knows? This novel is confusing me. Nothing about it is exciting or intriguing to make me want to keep reading. I was really hoping it would be to my like but you can't please everyone so this is no doubt more on my part than the author's. Keep writing dear author and maybe I will read something else of yours that I can really get into

Thank goodness for free read. I'd of stop already but since I can listen while I do house work I have left it on.

Two bad business partner. She is very dismissive of him and him her. Lack communication and respect for each other in a sense her so more. it seems he just doesn't know how to while she doesn't try. not that's and excuse for him not to include her on what he's doing but she is coming off self center and selfish and giving validity to her friend dislike of her sadly. He is coming off overbearing and parenting with his care for her. In a synopsis it seems she has forgotten she approached him but threats him like dirty I wanted to say air but you breathe air while you walk on dirt. He is not looking any better in the sense of him not knowing that he has caught the feels for her why he is acting this way I can't even bother. the author is loosing me

I am curious as to why the author have her constantly falling into traps and not having a body guard considering who her to be husband is you'd think after being drugged she would have a least a bodyguard pretending to be her driver. This damsel in distress is boring me.

Can't say I feel sorry for her. if the author was trying to evoke that sentiment i guest i didnt feel it. Not after she insist on dealing with those who betrayed her herself, yet she allow them the chance to harm her and still she can't do anything about it. She gets mad for him announcing without her knowing first yet she meets with her frenenemy and don't show up for her meeting with him. They may have but she seems to be gaining more than the other party on this deal at the moment.

Really good writing and unique werewolf plot. Ending felt rush but I appreciate the author for giving us an ending and not just dropping the story. I hope others will give it a chance and read it in support of the author because I see a lot of potential base on this novel that the author with more practice and time will be fantastic writing. I loved the story minus a few minor thing with the FL but it was worth the read. Good luck on your next novel author and I look forward to reading more from you. you have done better than some of the seasoned authors on here with your first novel.