Jeonson

Sometimes, I find romance novels really cheesy, but this novel really hooked my attention! This novel does not contain any forced romance, that some romance-novels love to do, and overall, I think this is a novel that has great potential! It will definitely make it to the big games one day. Fantastic work, author!

After reading the chapters, I can't say anything other than that this novel is a work of art. Initially, it was kind of difficult to read as there were a lot of separated paragraphs, but I coped with it well. This novel really hooked me, and I think that the author had put their maximum effort in the novel! I really enjoyed it, and I hope to see more! Amazing work, author!

This was also one of the few books that grabbed my attention soon as I got into the first chapter of the novel. So far, I really liked how the characters were built and I really dig for the fantasy setting with orcs and such. This novel definitely has potential, and I believe that it'll make it out to the big game one day. I really enjoyed the novel, and I will definitely be anticipating for new chapters! Phenomenal work, author!

Just the prologue alone had completely caught my attention. I could really feel that the author had poured all their effort into this novel. Reading this novel, I could really feel that I was inside of the novel and it was truly one hell of a ride. I would definitely love to see more future chapters and I highly recommend this novel to anyone that loves a good dark, crime story. Fantastic work, author!

Wow, I'm amazed by the grammar and the structure management over your paragraphs. After reading just the first chapter, I realized that my work needs way more refinement compare to your writing. So far I really enjoyed how the story has taken me, and I think that this book deserves much more attention! Keep up the phenomenal work!

You're editing suggestions are just what I needed! I'll make sure to apply some of these changes, thank you!

So far with the first two chapters, I can't really tell where the story is going. Since the chapters are short, it's hard to get in the story's atmosphere. I want to suggest that for each chapter, you write an average word count of 1.5k. Otherwise, I think the story has potential! Definitely will be happy to check it out in the future. Well done!

From just 4 chapters, it's hard to determine where the story is going, but so far, it was easy to understand, and I think the novel definitely has potential. Keep up the good work!

Author here for an overview of the status of the novel! The first few chapters currently have some grammar mistakes and might be vague, but as you progress, I assure you that it will get better. The chapters I currently have stockpile, which is planned to be released daily in approximately about a month, definitely shows improvement and I hope you will continue the support ヾ(≧▽≦*)o The real plot of this story will begin on the second arc, so don't give up on the novel just yet xD Thank you to those who have supported the novel from its start, and I hope you continue to do so! Jeonson out.

Great novel, and has a nice story so far. There was no difficulty in understanding, and overall, I think that the book has great potential. good work.