Aslanaust

Hey, I have a question. What language are you translating this Fanfic?

Wasn't Ollivanders founded in 382 B.C, making the Wand over 2000 years old?

Wait, how old was Harry when his brother was born? Didn't see it last chapter.

This has to be the worst fanfic I've ever seen. The classic Bad translated chinese fanfic where the mc gets bs Levels of power that don't make sense.

This has been a big disappointment. I truely thought this could be a good fanfic, but I've been proven wrong. The usual 'young master reaching the heavens god like being with op system edge lord' thinking they're better than everyone, but is a braindead moron.

It has so far being bland and tasteless. The concept is good and all, but it gets boring pretty quick. And the Author throwing curfballs of plot twist doesn't make it better.

I think they meant as a prodigy of the area he came from.

Wouldn't his first name be last? Freeman D. Kaden. Like every other character in one piece?

Hey, wanted to ask something. When you Upload a chapter, do you use the App from webnovel or something else ?

It is good. Don't drop it. Pacing does feel slow, considering how many chapters are about the same thing. The characters are a bit narrow minded.