Succulent_Peaches

One of the best novels I’ve read on here in a long time. The story is fleshed out so well and the story progression is perfect. Read this.

I have read up to chapter 35 and I am pleased with the story so far. The writing quality is pretty good with minimal mistakes (occasional typo). I would say this novel is more slice of life than anything else and I have enjoyed the Interactions between the mc and fmc. My only complaint is the word count per chapter, it feels too short. In one sense this is a good thing because I wanted to read more, but I felt the chapters could accomplish more with a higher word count. I’d recommend reading this.

This novel is great and the translation is top notch. I binged all the chapters in one day. Looking forward to updates [img=update]

I am really looking forward to this arc

This book has potential to be a classic like the Authors POV. I like the flow and the pace, my only complaint is that the characters that are introduced are not fleshed out more. I really enjoyed everything I’ve read so far and am looking forward to more chapters

I am pleasantly surprised that the reviews lived up to the hype. Everything so far is great and I want to read more chapters. Pat yourself on the back author

If you want something because you are bored and have nothing to read go for it. I wish there was something special about this novel to make it unique but it’s not. The arcs are unoriginal, the character templates as well and honestly that’s fine. The problem is that nothing is really fleshed out and the story feels like it’s going nowhere. I still don’t even understand the world he’s in and how the power systems work.

No shot I spent all these coins just for no chapters :(

The dialogue needs some serious work to me the writing feels all over the place. Not to mention the MC who acts like a 13 year old with serious ADHD it’s really hard to keep reading. The story has potential and I hope you continue to improve

I really like this novel and hope for consistent updates. The writing is very good and I like the flow of the story. What stands out most to me is how well the characters are fleshed out and have non cookie cutter personalities. I saved this book and will be looking forward for the next chapters