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Brain exist

I dropped this months ago... I'm trying to return reading this again Now, but this makes me so mad again asdfghj

Yeah yeah, forcefully enslaving a child must be normal for you huh? You reminds me of people around me who keeps saying that it was normal for me to be mentally and physically abused when I were young :)) "It's part of disciplining, it's normal."

Who is Alex

Is it like the dodge rolling inin kingdom hearts?

Kinda weird cause in MMORPG, newbies would always take damage unless they have good gears. (Is he perhaps playing VRMMORPG?) Also, I can't quite imagine the rolling strategy...

What does DM means

Keep up the good work author!

4.8 The concept is good (It's not that new but this concept is very rare to see.) The story development is decent. Nothing special is happening yet cause it's still new. For the World Background and Character Design, I think it's still too early to judge on that but I'm hoping to see something new but interesting. Writing Quality, I have a feeling that the author are probably using grammarly which is good. However, sometimes I feel like it's kinda hard to read(?). I think searching for the right synonyms, simplifying the sentence construction, and lessening the use of "," could help. (It might help with the word count too.)

Kinda similar to: This Group of Players are all Slimes The Boss behind the Game Gamer of the Underworld Game of the World Tree All my Disciples Suck I really want to see more of this! So I'm really thankful to see one again! I don't really have any idea for the story but what I expect to read from this is some Class Inheritance/advancements, Kingdom Building, War, World Domination(?), Other realms(?) like elf realm, demonic realm, angelic realm, demi-human realms(?) and the players on the story gonna focus more on teamplay power instead of individual prowress.