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Intriguing plot, nice characters and solid world building. The chapters are a bit few but the concept of the story got my attention. In the first chapter, there's a lot of info dump which is not a bad thing. This story is a solid one and I will add this story in my library. Good job!
Interesting find, this story is quite unique in its own right. As a super hero story I also find this one as refreshing. I have no problem with the writing quality. It's good and the characters are described properly. You have made a good solid story. Keep up the good work!
Here are my thoughts about the story. The pacing is quite slow but it is not a bad thing for this story. This will allow us to understand more of the world since the world is new to us readers. I also like the description and the length of the chapters. Not too short or too long and enough for us to understand the story better. That's all for now, I will probably make an update with a new review for this story.
Interesting take for a transmigration. I actually like worlds that are similar to our own yet different at the same time. I enjoyed reading your story. It was fun and your main character is desirable as well. A good start nonetheless. So far in what I have observed. The flow of the story was good. The information of the world is understandable and the events also. I was not lost to what happened and understood the context. You have written a story with a good start and have a good objective. Keep up the good work!
Thanks, I will do that. Thank you for your review.
I should say this is a refreshing take for a story based in an MMORPG setting. We usually read lof Swordsmen, Mages and classes that are overly used and cliches all over. Beastmasters so far are not usually used in such stories as well. This story is a unique and refreshing take and I am glad I have come across this one. So far I am impressed and liked what I read so far.