I can't really tell when your using a.i but you should go over what you have after using a.i to fix spelling and sentence structure, and possibly what you have now.

I like the whole gacha thing too many people start a story like this and never finish writing it, so far so good keep up the good work.

Your a pretty decent writer but your updates are not consistent I really enjoyed the starfire fic you were writing and hope you can start updating it again and I'm excited to read more on this DC fic and has alot of potential while the hp fic could have a clearer story. Otherwise, keep up the good work.

true but men can also be r*ped

he wouldn't be able to tell if it was electrified because unless their are extreme discharges of electricity the fence would not have any visible factors showing that it indeed is electrified but I believe the fence would be extremely hot so he could tell without directly touching the fence correct me if I'm wrong.

will she be able to do some type of cultivation and make herself stronger?

I really enjoy this story keep up the good work

is this dropped or are you focusing on other fics and stories?

all these MTLs are rotting my brain

glad your back

Imagine the Eldritch entity with the power of the infinity stones.*SHUDDER*

it would be cool if she used her faith energy to create or combine skills, she could make a planet and or her own dimension/afterlife(for followers or something when they die)or evolve her sacred gears further and even combine them but combining them doesn't sound like a good idea when an unknown eldritch entity is connected to her Orb of Infinity trough the eye- and if the Orb consumes more things it's probably impowering the Eldritch tentacle/eye thing.

while you are translating in a clear way are you going to continue from the last chapter as well?

this story seems pretty interesting keep up the good work 👏

this looks really intriguing I look forward to more updates

glad your back, keep up the good work!

Awesome chapter

good chapter btw what's your update schedule for your other dxd fanfic because that one is starting out pretty good

could be a Kryptonian

thanks for the update 😀