Kavyansh_Agrawal_0680

Nice...

So ability kingdom is like Domain??for example like in Jjk and such?

He can use necromancy to infiltrate their families to get even more recourses and destroy the families from inside out ( heheheh ) after all their father know about the assassination plan...so he can use the cripples to do something and the assassin can also be used to well...assassinate

Well..will this be taken care of?? Just curious

This review(or specifically "vent of frustration)is full of spoilers.. I USED IDIOT FOR THE MC MOSTLY Oh boy... Well.. first of all... the Mc The mc is straight up trash...his IQ is in negative...cant deduce simple things..has a heavenly treasure but doesn't explore one bit about...he is at the pinnacle of idiocy....always rash.. doesn't listen to others...stands at places like a dumb idiot...wants revenge but is stupidity playing around gathering "FRIENDS"...dude knows that the lin yun whatever guy...came with the elders of his sect to kill the 5th elder..as stated by lin yun himself.. But what does the mc do?? He fricking runs away crying like an idiot..dude your enemy is in front of you..and YOU RAN AWAY CRYING THAT LIKE A CHILD..then 2 chapters later..he doing bromance....HE HAS NO MOTIVATION...IS JUST A STUPID GUY.. THAT'S ALL THERE IS TO THE MC.... UUUUGHHHHHH.........he doesn't even explore the heavenly pearl completely..... An example of the idiot..- He takes little yellow to the heavenly pearl.. sometimes later finds little yellow sleeping...now...he tries to touch him but gets stung instead... little yellow wakes and heals him..and makes the flower normal..ONLY AFTER THAT DID THE IDIOT ACTUALLY REALISE THAT THE FLOWERS WERE ATTACKING HIM DUE TO LITTLE YELLOW ... I don't know wht he thought was the cause of attck before.....UGGH He then tells little yellow to same thing in the real world as traps...little yellow tries to tell the idiot that he cannot do that in the real world..by hand signs... THE IDIOT YELLS AT HIM TO EXPLAIN PROPERLY...EVEN KNOWING THAT LITTLE YELLOW CAN'T TALK... (that's what the idiot knew at the time) and when little yellow does communicate...he gets shocked..i mean dude...why did you even tell him to explain.... Tch.. There are many more things.... I'll waste no more time..anymore Other then the MC...hmmm... IT'S ALL CLITCH..

Okay dude..i know..it is your work and my opinion probably doesn't matter...but i will still say..dude your writing is too overwhelming for me.. things that can be written or explained very simply are written very complexly...and i feel it's just a waste of words..i know its only my opinion and my fault..but i will still put the blame on you (that's human nature for ya...).. still what i wrote was serious from my side (Ignore the the ratings other than writing quality in my review..as i set them random

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