I'm coming up with a re-write, I have too little time and my updates are too spread out, so some issues might crop up. I'm dealing with every issue there is. I will make this novel as great as I possibly can!

Dunno what that is but...

A story with good form, I actually have rather high expectations for this novel, and the video games' section can get fascinating, most especially where the viewers comment. It has a nice premise, some things do need changing, but the issue is rather insignificant. I look forward to reading more of this.

I honestly did not intend it to go for that long, but there's no way I could cut it at the middle. If you have more questions, then hit my discord. I respond to all constructive criticism, but comments are unsuitable for this purpose.

In due time I need to set some pace man...

you actually beat me to it and I wrote it!!!

got it

I'm working on that

A great story, the character already has some depth to him, that too despite the few chapters. There's serious room for improvement. Join in for the journey of your lives TwT

Smart...

It's always satisfying to read a bully beat down

wth how is he supposed to see?

How unfortunate. "..."

Another one? he-he (Chuckles darkly)

oof ok a good one

A great storyline to be honest. there is still alot to be improved on. the author should edit the chapters to prevent repetition of certain phrases. Its a great novel above all else so please give it a read if you come across it good luck author!

There's a lot to improve, the novel is great, the author has an amazing plot. this novel deserves more. the character definitions require more detail but that is easy to correct. good luck author

of course

noted. I will take steps to curb that thank you!

thank you for yours... "..."