writer of "an ordinary traveller who
meets everyone extraordinary"
2021-01-12 入りましたGlobal
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ライティング
13.1h
読書の
24
本を読む
バッジ
5
瞬間
24
MIST_VINONA2yr
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Hi, the author here. my dumb self made a huge mistake by messing up the update order so pl read little brother of 2 part 4 before labyrinth 1, thank you and sorry. ( ignore this comment if the order is fixed)
Ch 21 Little Brother OF 2 (3)
An Ordinary Traveler Who Meets Every One Extraordinary
It's a fun read I kinda liked the author notes in the middle of the story feels like I am reading along with the author, [img=recommend][img=recommend]
it is well written and it brings out the emotions of the reader. good work overall [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
the first chapter is very beautifully written the story's narration is pleasing to read. overall has a peasant feel to it[img=recommend][img=recommend]
so this review is only for upto chapter 6 it's a little slow paced for my liking it's probably just me and the protagonists seems plain but that's just my opinion and there maybe development in the later chapters
YES ITS THE AUTHOR I am going to give my self some appreciation for the hard work I did writing this novel despite having a mountain of work graciously given to me by school
An Ordinary Traveler Who Meets Every One Extraordinary
this is a very well written story. never thought a sword could be such a cool mc and just how many forms does he have ?
by the end of the story I wouldn't be shocked to see around 50 froms.
only the comic adaption was missing and here it is now i have no clue how many times am i going to see, read etc the same story without getting bored.i just love this so much i cant say no to anything related
Li Ling chuckled it off and said, "You can buy the items. I don't know about the whole arcade though, maybe you'll have to steal the heart of the owner first."
What?! The gamemaster and the top player are dating?! [BL]
Li Ling was like a puppet master but he would never want Zhihao to be his puppet so he would not be the one pulling the strings from behind. He would sometimes wonder what it would be like having Zhihao follow his every command but whenever he thought about it, he would slap himself on the face and put a full stop to his improper thoughts.
What?! The gamemaster and the top player are dating?! [BL]
this is soooooooo good I am in love the mc's narration of food did make me a little hungry hehe. the mc interactions with the system and brother are just so sweet
this way too early to review as there aren't much details about the mc or the world but poor mc can't wait for his evil awakening kekeke and the war setting is awesome will be waiting for more updates