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Just for this comment i'll release the rest of arc 1 tonight
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Thanks for the review glad you like the cover!
Thanks for the review! I'll try to maintain drawbacks so he can't just spam it all the time
¡Gracias por la reseña! (Thanks for the review!)
Thanks! MC has the potential to become an Omega Level in the future
My own universe loosely based around the comics set a bit into the future an example would be this story’s Spider-Man is already late 30s
Your review has a lot of personal bias and false information. This will be a long fic and we’re barely over halfway through the first arc. There will be story implications for him being the Lucifer son but not in the first half of the first arc Your first critique is valid he is Lucifer’s son so he should have some more of his powers I’ve corrected that as I’ve continued to write. Second critique the justice league have YET to make an appearance key word YET we are only 40 chapters into the fic and the focus has been on the teen titans in jump city why would the justice league show up and be important? Third critique everybody knows his identity E V E R Y B O D Y knows is just false. Donna is is they only one on the team who explicitly knows his father is Lucifer because he told her during sword training. Maybe Starfire because she joined later. The others on the team may have pieced it together through clues but mostly just know he is half angel. The only villain that knows is deathstroke who is figured it out because he is deathstroke one of the worlds greatest tacticians and assassins. In conclusion this review is misleading very subjective and I feel like you just kind of skimmed the story overall.
I've started implementing more of Lucifer's powers starting in chapter 37