I said I enjoyed the arc, I never take anything to serious on here, as long as there isn’t any boy on boy romance I usually stick along for the ride

Very well done, I was pessimistic about this mini arc at first, but I can’t lie I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for the chapter.

What year is it currently, if it’s 2014 or earlier then the perfect song for the MC to receive would be march madness, would be the perfect hit single for his debut album

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You gotta remember the time period he is currently in, during the 20th century it was hard for women to leave their husband. I know they aren’t married yet but they probably will when he gets back from war. Like I was saying, women put up with their man beating/abusing them and cheating on them because they didn’t have the mindset or job opportunities that made them feel safe to leave the toxic/abusive relationship

Good pacing

Yep but only for 2 more years, he can play the role of friend to Beyonce and help her with her less than ideal relationship. During this time he will put out 2 good or great albums and will be buzzing in the music scene, plenty of chances for him and B to collaborate and build their chemistry.

You missed the perfect opportunity for Henny Ak to appear

Let’s be honest, with everything going on with P Diddy I don’t think Jay Z is innocent either, With that being said “it’s mister steal your girl”.

I’m just grateful for another great chapter, keep up the good work bro 💪🏿

@AmSincere, You mentioned that lil Reese nem was scared that he would snitch, so they had to put on a diss track first to stop him from ever doing that. It would prove them right and ruin his rap career because nobody likes snitches (except for T.I and Gunna😂).

I thought this was finna turn into a boondocks episode featuring the booty warrior😂😂😂

Goodbye Finn unfortunately you will not be missed, but don’t worry buddy the Mc will take good care of your girlfriend

Ahhh a man of the culture I see

I’m thinking the same, but like the actual show we need these flashbacks to get an understanding of how the MC changed the plot. Hopefully it doesn’t go past chapter 50

Tftc

Yep, definitely lil Reese, he’s from Chicago and the dude in the phone told him to come back to Chicago and make a diss track

For da free

No cap this story deserves to be in the top 3 rankings

Good question, I don’t wanna have 10-15 chapters of scenes between him in the war and Adam running the business back home. Just 3-5 chapters max then a time skip