Layios

Tbh I have mixed feeling. MC is portrayed as smart guy with high IQ but can't even recognize if his sister is really his own sister. He'll have some doubt only hundred chapter later but before that he'll already reveal most of his secret. Story is interesting but romance is soso with just a focus on Hu Liena I think and hundred chapter later when he truly discover that his "sister" wasn't really his sister but Bibi Dong and his true sister is away idk where.

I did some researching and understood more about "Epistrophe", sure it was my fault for pointing a mistake that was not but I don't think what I wrote was as offensive as what you responded to me. Like I said, I just wrote what I felt was "wrong" to me, now I know this "kind" of literature speech and won't make the same error and I'm grateful for that but It's not your job to give me lesson such as insulting my so called lack of knowledge, it's not like I'm some kind of professional reader, I'm just a casual reader, here to read some good story and sometimes giving some review. So next time, please be more respectful and mindful of your own speech.

Didn't they know the names of his skill ? Or it's only his overall ranking that is public.

It's too weird tbh, everyone who has S-ranked skill receive the same reward or not ? And why all these reward help him climb higher rank, too weird doesn't it mean everyone that have S rank are around rank 1500ish ? Or the reward are different and each upgrade give different power up like some S skill even when lvl'd up will just allow you to climb few rank while other S rank are stronger and give you more when it lvl up.

There're too many "change" word - > better if you wrote"The society changed such as people value and the social ladder"

Honestly it suck, I've read 60ish raw chapter and can just say that author/MC is forcing too much on losing money that it downgrade all the good quality of it's story. I'm not against MC fully using it's system but I think the fact that he needs to "lose" money on his gf so that he can get x100 back is annoying. He doesn't seems to care much about her tbh, he "use" her as cash cow and she fell in love with his "kindness" as for him it's a pretty good deal 'cause she's beautiful, skillful, obedient and many more, anyway I don't rly feel any love from MC or it's not very well pronounced. Later he's just trying to make money (losing) and for that he needs to invest on his GF but her GF is so kind that she try to minimize the lose but he still try even though he gain money by doing business by investing on her. I'm honestly fed up by his greed or what's over. In the end it's a game of who can lose or minimize (and have profit) money. Anyway idea's all right, not very original but still could have been interesting but ended up bad with it's setting like it's system rebate or MC personality.

Not so interesting, MC transported in a parallel world? With fantasy creature and humanity being primitive so he'll try to rebuild civilization? Btw click bait title "_" Prietress want to be his wife but he doesn't want to 'cause of security or what' s not

Nvm don't read this shit. MC just a guy who get "raped" by his senior sister and give money to everyone

I'm not sure if it is but the synopsis is pretty similar : 玄幻：暴击返还，开局被赐婚师姐 If it is, just want to say fk WN, changing name and even synopsis to make it like a OG novel.

Anyone got raw??????......................