Player0Kun

You should start to add more vampires design like alucard from hellsing ultimate and such

combined power will act as soft power downgrade and will make sure that he is not outright op

good work author. If he is going to be hopping multiverse then do a arc with Skyrim, also make the ai engin ein orbit (i forgot spelling for her name lol) into a normal humanoid size and make her his assistant of sort, also make it so that when he leaves worm verse his power are more compacted meaning they are combined into a cool power package.

Only in MCU.

Do a chapter in which Peter and mc both build his spider man suit Ironman style with lots of testing and redesigns. Also, make a comment how he has re-engineering ark reactor and fit it in his suit (not visible), Suit design, instead of a nanotechnology or nannies make it with modular hexagonal chips like a dumb down version of Ironman model 51. Make it that Spiderman can just add gadgets to his suit and it will connect to that machine and in later chapters when he has studied klyntar he can create a artificial symbiot mixed with magic or runes from other universe

Story line is good . This is too fast paced. Things are happening fast and people are accepting them easily. It needs to show down and many chapters are needed to be added inbetween to make this story better.

You know this is the first MC that I have come accross that uses magical AI or Great Sage correctly. He uses great sage to ask for opinions and analyse situations.

This have potential. I want to know if mc is going to have any powers of abilities. If yes then make them in a way that they have very high potential but start of as weak. Do a proper generic magician.

Make it that there is a another player or gamer that is actually "Other". But do not publish any chapters on his jour ney other than few povs. Make a different Fanfiction about this player and since he is in true North there will be no need for him to interact with wider world too much. Just take a note how our both mc interacted with each other and just write that interaction from new pov.

This story has potential and I like how our protagonist is in a new world with Skyrim character. If you have not dropped this then i suggest you release chapters.