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Great novel dude but go and email web novel helpers, I am pretty sure they would be happy to offer a contract considering that this is decently well known and the fact that you update regularly.

Ye.

Thanks for your review, I hope you read further as I feel it gets a bit better and as a new author I am still learning. Thanks a lot and I will keep in mind on all the points you have incurred. Thanks!

Based on all of your edits I will keep in mind and adapt to all of them.

Thanks a lot for your review!!

Also, thank you for all your correction. I have implemented all of them.

Dude, thanks a lot for all ur fixes, they are really gonna help a lot.

You will see, but to answer your question no.

Yes.

Thank you for your review.