Darkswan
Just a normal girl who loves writing n does it to escape reality, i hope you like my books and if you have any questions you can join my discord server: https://discord.gg/Mg9FsrYH2n
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I have to edit that
Yeah, as stated a few scenes within the book was inspired by the slime
Yeah, but they also did most of the work
Well, their slate is not clean, you will know what I mean later on in the story
This is quite an engaging story, I like the MC, the flow of the story is really good as is the author's writing style, no complaints there, this is a good read for harem lovers especially, the growth of the MC, strength wise is a bit slow but despite that, fun to read since we get everything step by step, this is all I can say for now, because the story is still progressing. Best wishes, author!
Later on in the story it will be
thank you
I've just finished the first few chapters and will give the review based on that, and so far the story is well written and detailed, grammar is on point. The author describes what needs to be described in such a way that it gives you a vivid picture. It's entertaining, and the characters are likable. From what I've read, there's not much more to say because the story is just getting started, but it has a lot of potential, and I wish the author the best of luck!