Soal_San

He was the god of chaos and storms, not murder, not death, not war.

It technically wasn't stated either way, but she was in the forest when Voldemort blasted Harry, and she was the one who lied and said that Harry was dead after checking his pulse. There's plenty of reason for her to have been a death eater who betrayed Voldy in the end, or she could have been there solely because she was Lucius's wife and just took a chance to maybe save her son.

Peruvian Darkness powder was just imported from Peru.

Shouldn't that be 10 years ago?

How I imagine Wood crying upon finding out Harry exercises:

Or maybe, if he was sorted after Harry, he asked to be placed somewhere else out of fear, and the hat allowed it.

Change hurts. Everyone, on some level, is conceptually aware of this. People only change when the pain of change is less than the pain of staying the same. Even then, change is a difficult endeavor because it's easy to back pedal and decide that the change is more painful part of the way through.

I can't speak for updates since it was done when I got here, so five. World background, it's a fic which is normally a 4, but there was an effort to give more depth to the usual setting, so 5. It's a TL, so I won't judge writing quality, and instead, I'll judge translation quality, 4 out of 5, there were minor mistakes, but it's not perfect, still well done though, and there are corrections in effective writing quality that make the TL better than the original. Story development, I'll give a 3 at best, it's a basic power trip fantasy fic, and it is short as far as finished fics go, so the story comes across as rushed at the end, more like the original Author was done but didn't want to disappoint by dropping. Character design, is a 3, as I said, it's a short power trip fic so there really isn't much characterization happening, as in, a Character gets established and doesn't have any growth for the rest of the story, with the MC having the most growth, but 43 chapters isn't a lot of room for anyone to grow. Overall, a 4 star bump TL of a 3 star fic.

You know, if I were him, I would point out that the prophecy never actually says who the Dark Lord is, and, so far, Dumbledore has taken a number of dark and manipulative actions.

I'm sorry, "The plan"? What plan? When have we ever been told anything about Dumbledore having a plan besides "Make sure the 'light' side wins the gorilla war by raising the Child of Prophecy"?