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seems like original
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umm..
この本は削除されました。 - MaTachin2yrコメント"I am now a rich second generation. So How can a rich second generation like me not rely on his own money? You don't have to persuade me anymore. First purchase fucking three million worth counterattack points." Seth said domineeringly.
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rassei
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- MaTachin2yrコメントCh 57 Chapter 57 :Honest with feelings (3)
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- MaTachin2yrコメントYou could see their faces were blushing with each other...but thanks to Yamato's experience with the seraphine...Hero bravely squeezed Irina's plump ass.
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should just said bluntly "i want to be the one who takes your virginity so please protect it"
"What? Do you think that being a virgin is uncool or something? No. Instead, I think being a virgin is something amazing. You preserve your purity for the person that you love instead of following everyone, so no one will think that you're weird or different." Shishio looked at Yukinoshita and said, "There's no need to be in a hurry. When you fall in love and find the right person for you, it isn't too late for you to lose your virginity, so right now, if you don't have someone like that, it is better not to think too much. Once you lose it, you won't be able to retake it. You only have one membrane inside you, so keep it for the person that you love the most." - MaTachin2yr発表
the most absurd DXD fic I've ever read. in the early chapters he was very weak and had a plan to take revenge against Sirzechs, and then suddenly he became very strong and could even fight against ophis! in less than 10 chapters after that it became more ridiculous. MC doesn't practice at all and suddenly Ophis said she can't win against him if they fight again. you will think this fic is about Mc's revenge against sirzechs and grayfia?big NO. I don't care about mc that suddenly forgiving sirzechs and grayfia for no reason, but MC personality will make readers really stupid because you don't know he is beta or alpha mc. one second he is rude and arrogant towards everyone but if he got teased slightly he will blush and act like a baby. the author also change Rias and the others personalities so much that it will confuse you and even make you think you are reading an oc character, not a DXD character. i'm sure in the later chapters mc won't even use his full power so the plot will still go on like any other fic. the only charm if you want to read this fic? only for the harems. a fic with absurd power stronger than ophis in less than 20 chapters is just stupid for me. I'm out.
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??? why repeated?
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he is still weak compare to the leaders in that room. Even I still prefer Issei's pervertness over this guy rude attitude towards them
"You want me to keep standing then?" I questioned with an raised eyebrow and leaned back on my chair with a cocky grin, "Make me move."