Alisa_Leslie269
Just trying to make my dreams come true......
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Alisa_Leslie2692yrに返信 rskdramaActually I didn't lock my chaps from 13, I'm trying to have that fixed because it's supposed to be locked from 21.Not everyone will like my book and that's ok but before you judge or criticize my writing how about you work on writing a paragraph that's actually coherent,if you even know what that word means 😊
- Alisa_Leslie2692yrに返信 Obin_Nii
hmm,guess you can't see the commas,hyphens or full stops.If you don't like it,you don't have to keep reading
There's that static again.Just what sort of weird Alice in Wonderland crap is this? While my brain tries to catch up,my body is thrown unceremoniously on what feels like large marbles.Unbelievably my eyes and nose register what appears to be.....gumballs? My brain skitters awake as my eyes once again widen to saucers.There are millions of red,blue,purple,pink,orange,green and heck I don't know the names of all those other colours,but I'm sure every single shade on the spectrum is represented here,balls of glittery sugary gum underneath me and I lay there,my torso twisted and supported by my forearms,my legs folded at the knees,just staring with my hair forming a curtain around my face.Definately putting 'haidresser' on my to-do- list.That normal thought seeps through my trance-like state and my head lifts.Then bam,back in the trance I go.This 'in shock' thing is becoming my new norm.Im surrounded by that weird foamy fog.It's thick and glows uncannily blue.I can only see through it if I focus on certain spots and man when I do this place just gets stranger and stranger.As far as I can tell I'm in some sort of forrest but these trees seem to be....melting? And they're not green either but a weird hazel colour and every single one of them is dripping brown goo,with folds of the stuff running down the trunk.My ears pick up the 'plop plop' they make and I stand,my incredulity still firmly in place.I take two steps,my curiosity piqued, because I swear that stuff looks-and smells-like rich chocolate,but I'm halted by that sonorous voice."I wouldn't do that if I were you". - Alisa_Leslie2692yrに返信 ecarranCh 20 Playing With Myself
- Alisa_Leslie2693yrコメント
thank u 4 supporting my book ❤️
"This is no time to grope her boy! She's choking! Give her a good swat on the back!" Yelled Glob and I tried to lift my head and aim my trusty eye daggers at him but alas,I was too busy suffocating.I heard Wayne's smooth,British voice explain to him that Keanu was trying to help me and Logan's steady "Oh my god,Oh my god,the meat is gonna kill her," on repeat. - Alisa_Leslie2693yrに返信 Linda_RutherfordCh 1040 THE WAR (11)
- Alisa_Leslie2693yrに返信 ecarran
Hi! sorry to contact you here,hope the author will forgive me! I've been reading your comments etc and I love how engaging you are, I'm hoping you'll be willing to give my novel Follow Through a read and give me an honest review? it's a fantasy romance full of comedy,adventure and steamy scenes that I'd love to get feedback on (chap 20 & 31 I've just started,lol).It's a helluva ride and a guaranteed laugh so I hope you'll enjoy it ❤️
- Alisa_Leslie2693yrに返信 ecarran
Hi! sorry to contact you here,hope the author will forgive me! I've been reading your comments etc and I love how engaging you are, I'm hoping you'll be willing to give my novel Follow Through a read and give me an honest review? it's a fantasy romance full of comedy,adventure and steamy scenes that I'd love to get feedback on (chap 20 & 31 I've just started,lol).It's a helluva ride and a guaranteed laugh so I hope you'll enjoy it ❤️
- Alisa_Leslie2693yrに返信 Linda_Rutherford
Hi! sorry to contact you here,hope the author will forgive me! I've been reading your comments here and I love how engaging you are, I'm hoping you'll be willing to give my novel Follow Through a read and give me an honest review? it's a fantasy romance full of comedy,adventure and steamy scenes that I'd love to get feedback on (chap 20 & 31.ive just started,lol).It's a helluva ride and a guaranteed laugh so I hope you'll enjoy it ❤️
Ch 1040 THE WAR (11) - Alisa_Leslie2693yrに返信 ruffatorres
Hi! I'm just starting on your book and I'm loving it so far, I'm hoping you'll be willing to give my novel Follow Through a read and give me an honest review? it's a fantasy romance full of comedy,adventure and steamy scenes that I'd love to get feedback on (chap 20 & 31).It's a helluva a ride and a guaranteed laugh so I hope you'll enjoy it ❤️
Ch 66 Mystery - Alisa_Leslie2693yrに返信 KaGen
Hi! sorry to contact you here,hope the author will forgive me! I'm hoping you'll be willing to give my novel Follow Through a read and give me an honest review? it's a fantasy romance full of comedy,adventure and steamy scenes that I'd love to get feedback on (chap 20 & 31).It's a helluva a ride and a guaranteed laugh so I hope you'll enjoy it ❤️
- Alisa_Leslie2693yrに返信 KelliLynn72
Hi! Would you like another book to delve into! Follow Through has a kick ass female lead who's quirky,food obsessed and speaks the language of sarcasm.The book is loaded with comedy,adventure and steamy romance.Here's the link of you're interested https://***.webnovel.com/book/follow-through_19133137805376105 ♥️
Ch 166 Chapter 43 - Alisa_Leslie2693yrに返信 LCM
Hi! Would you like another book to delve into! Follow Through has a kick ass female lead who's quirky,food obsessed and speaks the language of sarcasm.The book is loaded with comedy,adventure and steamy romance.Here's the link of you're interested https://***.webnovel.com/book/follow-through_19133137805376105 ♥️
Ch 241 Chapter 118 - Alisa_Leslie2693yrに返信 Midnight_666
Hi! Would you like another book to delve into! Follow Through has a kick ass female lead who's quirky,food obsessed and speaks the language of sarcasm.The book is loaded with comedy,adventure and steamy romance.Here's the link of you're interested https://***.webnovel.com/book/follow-through_19133137805376105 ♥️
Ch 241 Chapter 118 - Alisa_Leslie2693yrに返信 XOMatsumaeohana
Hi! Would you like another book to delve into! Follow Through has a kick ass female lead who's quirky,food obsessed and speaks the language of sarcasm.The book is loaded with comedy,adventure and steamy romance.Here's the link of you're interested https://***.webnovel.com/book/follow-through_19133137805376105 ♥️
Ch 31 Joining her harem - Alisa_Leslie2693yrに返信 Danielle_Lindsay
Hi! Would you like another book to delve into! Follow Through has a kick ass female lead who's quirky,food obsessed and speaks the language of sarcasm.The book is loaded with comedy,adventure and steamy romance.Here's the link of you're interested https://***.webnovel.com/book/follow-through_19133137805376105 ♥️
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