Mad_man13
I love to read and do it for at least 3-4 hours a day
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Mad_man131dコメントIt only swaps with living things or objects with enough cursed energy. Nitpick I know, but just letting you know
Boogie Woogie : by clapping you can swap places with anything within your range.- Mad_man132dコメント
Why just Ryomen sukuna is enough it’s overkill and boring for the rest to be there. Takes importance and imap away from sukuna skill set
SKILLS; - Mad_man133dに返信 fangyuan10
Hey this story is definitely one of the better ones over read a lot of times people struggle with grammar or making sure the person acts in character. I read fanfics all the time and they act wildly different from there original counterparts sometimes. Just take your time to flesh and plan out the story.
- Mad_man135dコメント
I think rather than reincarnating with wishes he should just woken up as baby geto or whatever age you would want. I the other wishes are stupid and it’s more interesting for him to just try and improve on geto’s own abilities using his knowledge rather than him getting wishes
Ch 2 Reincarnation - Mad_man136d発表
- Mad_man139dコメント
This one
Percy Jackson + Riordan verse - Mad_man1311dコメント
This makes no sense It should be her giving it to him
The guy gave me a letter stating that I am allowed to possess wands, so it should be fine. - Mad_man1311dコメント
It should say stared at her
"Calm," I said and stared at him. "Look into my eyes." - Mad_man1311dコメント
I feel like this is kinda a boring motivation and isn’t very compelling, like getting strong to survive the marvel universe
And finally, the third condition: I wouldn't conquer or destroy the world. The world entertained me. I'd have endless fun scaring people, even venturing to other countries to terrorize anyone, be they heroes, villains, or cosmic beings. - Mad_man1311dコメント
I feel like his dissent Into evil was to fast. And I protagonist who only wants to kill people just to kill them is boring. And you might say he’s also trying to get strong but that feels secondary like it’s a byproduct of his killing and not the reason for it.
Next, I began to undress her, cutting her stomach while singing an old song. Slowly, I extracted her organs and arranged them like a scarf around Alice's neck. "Perfect!! It's great," I exclaimed. - Mad_man1311dコメント
I don’t really like when people do this. Nothing against the story for it I just dislike it.
"Well... if you want, I can block your memories. When you reach a certain age, you could recover them. For you, it would seem as if you transmigrated, but it is a reincarnation. It's like blocking something in a person's mind and then recovering it at an exact age," Tom explained. - Mad_man1328dコメント
I feel like this is to much and at the same time doesn’t matter, I mean he’s the shadow monarch your over complicating things when his shadow monarch powers are more than enough for him to steamroll everything
I would have to continue to purify my core to see if I discover anything new. So for now the only thing I could do is practice the Rokushiki Techniques and purify my mana core. - Mad_man131mthに返信 cardo_sinclair
- Mad_man131mthに返信 FanboyDeowerpower
Yeas I know I was just using an exaggerated example to get my point across. You still have the problem of him being able to have unlimited resources.
The soul then said: I want the power of Minecraft's creative mode with the Player Hub. The soul then thought: this way I can have money, portions, magic books, power of creation among other things. - Mad_man131mthに返信 FanboyDeowerpower
I feel like give him Minecraft creative is a little much. I mean he would basically be unkillable with the infinite amount of golden apples and undying totems he could create. You should had given him the ability to craft stuff from Minecraft if he gathered the right materials. So he would have to work for it.
The soul then said: I want the power of Minecraft's creative mode with the Player Hub. The soul then thought: this way I can have money, portions, magic books, power of creation among other things. - Mad_man131mth発表
- Mad_man131mthに返信 Storm2023
Preach brother
The soul then said: I want the power of Minecraft's creative mode with the Player Hub. The soul then thought: this way I can have money, portions, magic books, power of creation among other things. - Mad_man131mthコメントCh 1 The Egg
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Chance not change
Shizune frowned, "What is your problem?" She asked, "Every change you get, you always defile Tsunade-sama's dignity!"