HankTheFisherMan
Webnovel is ass… Cant find any good fanfics anymore🥲
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Read till chapter 50. Its a pretty decent story, but just not my cup of tea. Harry doesn’t seem to have any ambition and feels like a lifeless doll who just does everything Tom wants. There are almost no interactions between Harry and other people. This can all be attributed to his past and his problems with his soul and stuff, but its just a boring read. It also seems that author is trying to follow the plot closely and is almost changing nothing. Some parts of the story seem missing.
I dont think its good. 9 chapters in and the mc has no personality at all and also no goal at all. Her powers are as bland as can be. The training arc was also just a year passed and now she’s S rank… Nothing is really good about the story, but if you have nothing to do I quess you could check it out.
The story is getting worse and worse
Alarm clock…
With how strong he is getting money doesnt even matter anymore…
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If u dont want to do them them just don’t. Its your story and if you let someone else write on it its not entirely yours anymore or something.
This can be done, but I’d like it to be the story of the mc. So also things of the perspective of the female lead but not 50/50. Id like it to be 70/30 or 80/20.
1 letter less….
This is the whole thing where the gamer system comes in. Be OP in everything you do.
The mc is really stupid… She is weak for now and when ur weak the greatest strength u can have is knowledge. But she is just giving it all away for free.. And why doesn’t she just train. She has the most op system ever where with a couple weeks of training u can be OP….
Haven’t read the story, but if I could give u a tip I would make a better synopsis. Neither the title nor the synopsis gives me any idea what to expect of the story. All I have are the tags wich don’t help much.
Sounds like something u have to sacrifice a lot of virgins for.
Maybe just direct sunlight
Lets try it out… U first! U hit 10 times and I 3 and see who bleeds.