Kota_Sama

Early review, will probably do another one when I read Further into the story. The beginning is definitely pretty good, I enjoy a bit of buildup before getting into things and honestly it's interesting to see a character that an author can connect with so much. The Cruel reality of writing is always what the editors think of the works and if they are worth publishing or not. But anywho, I liked it because I'm able to connect with it a bit. I'd recommend it either way though because it's definitely got me wanting to read more of the story! I'll be writing another review down the line. Read This Novel [img=recommend] Highly Recommended [img=update] [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]

Not too bad of a start [img=recommend]

why lame?

depressing

hmmm sounds familiar to how editors really are ;-;

Obviously bias author review. I believe that this story is worth the read, yeah it can have a frustrating start but I believe if you stick with it that it will be worth the time. Updates are daily with 1-4 chapters a day unless I'm in a really good mood then there could be more. story development: If you like stories with lots of action, women, and interesting twists then I'd recommend reading my work. Character designs are amazing <3 The world itself has a lot to offer and I'd love for everyone to join me as I bring Haru's journey through the craziest of rollercoasters. Harem? I didn't intend for it but if it comes off that way and it's supported, I'll consider taking a vote on it later. Writing quality isn't terrible. I usually go through everything to fix mistakes and if I miss something tell me! All feedback/support is appreciated. Thank you if you choose to support my novel. Even if you drop the story, I appreciate the time you took to read it in the first place.

I appreciate the review and I understand the struggle!

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