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Still reading through the story but this is my reciew as of Chapter 50: It’s a decent story but lacks some realism and details that would parallel reality in a way that would make the story more relatable. Some phrases used don’t match what they are defined as and at times a clear disregard for common sense even if it is a fantasy; such as letting small children swim in a “river” that is over 100 meters deep unsupervised and even lies outside of their village gates, right after they were just attacked by hundreds of monsters.
This actually does make sense because Deirus’s schemes were evolving even mimicking Jirni’s yet even though she had shown that she was leagues above him in manipulation in earlier chapters, she was stagnating now. The author had led us to believe it was because she was being outplayed but it was all according to her keikaku
The evolution isnt small taratect it should be small of a different spider species
Wasn’t his name Fred?
Vorden actually seemed to like Erin, Sil on the other hand...
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