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Keam_M_2394

Keam_M_2394

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2020-11-07 入りましたGlobal
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  • Keam_M_2394
    Keam_M_23944 years ago
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    This is pretty good so far. I think just a little editing is needed, and the characters are all very mysterious and interesting. Curious to know where this story goes in the future!

  • Keam_M_2394
    Keam_M_23944 years ago
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    Good story so far! You really feel for the mc as a reader and just get thrown right in! Lots of grammar mistake, easy fix, look forward to reading more from the author!

  • Keam_M_2394
    Keam_M_23944 years ago
    発表

    Very hooked so far so far so good. Johnson character is very relatable and now he has a stranger to take care of who is frankly adorable. Good character interactions. More often updates will help with views. Thanks for your story!