I've shared the two chapters to seek your feedback on whether you'd like me to rewrite the remaining 22 chapters in a similar manner. If you would like me to proceed, I am more than happy to do so.
The narrative stays the same but I've enriched it by incorporating additional details, enhancing character interaction, providing thorough explanations, and refining the plot.
Ch 1 Chapter 1
Chola dynasty prince with a system (Ancient India)