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FreshMelon

FreshMelon

Lv2

I like to write.

2020-11-03 入りましたGlobal
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  • FreshMelon
    FreshMelon2yr
    に返信 SujayPatra

    Thank you for your response. I couldn't be more glad you think that way. For the past months, I have been receiving a number of queries like - When am I going to continue? Am I even going to continue the novel? Preparing for a new novel? The thing is - life has hit me hard; It was not easy to suddenly put on an 'indefinite hiatus' tag on something I was so invested into. But I had to do it. It was/is 'either this or that' kind of situation. Now, answers: I would be continuing on a daily basis starting from the midst of Jan. I don't care how many readers I have/how much revenue I get - I am writing for myself. [Some more fancy/big words... blah. blah. blah] I am, in fact, working on a novel. It's been very stressful for the past few months and I intend to write something silly/fun for recreation.

    Ch 249 Branch Director (Part 3)
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  • FreshMelon
    FreshMelon2yr
    に返信 ClearNote9

    Not sure. Busy in my post-graduate exam preps. Once I feel free, I'll continue.

    Ch 249 Branch Director (Part 3)
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  • FreshMelon
    FreshMelon2yr
    に返信 VictoriousHermit

    Thanks for the review.

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  • FreshMelon
    FreshMelon2yr
    に返信 HolyOniiSama

    Why 'disgusting' lol. If you don't have the appropriate word in your vocabulary, just don't type it. Anyways, thanks for reading. Not much of constructive criticism, but criticism nonetheless. I'll try to improve.

    Ch 249 Branch Director (Part 3)
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  • FreshMelon
    FreshMelon2yr
    に返信 OCspeller

    Needs to be corrected. Thanks.

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  • FreshMelon
    FreshMelon2yr
    に返信 Xenox

    Thanks for the review. Glad you liked it. Regarding the third world, I've gotten mixed responses but for now, not reading it wouldn't affect the story in a major way. With this new arc, I've planned 120-some chaps but depending on how I see fit, it might go long as I plan to work with the slice-of-life theme.

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  • FreshMelon
    FreshMelon2yr
    に返信 52136

    Glad you like it!

    Ch 247 Branch Director (Part 1)
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  • FreshMelon
    FreshMelon2yr
    に返信 redkingtfk

    Thanks for the review. I appreciate it.

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  • FreshMelon
    FreshMelon2yr
    に返信 Hussain_Khalifa

    6.5/10. Has been mentioned later.

    Ch 3 Class
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  • FreshMelon
    FreshMelon2yr
    に返信 sinc

    No comments.

    Ch 237 System
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  • FreshMelon
    FreshMelon2yr
    に返信 sinc

    I think it's very obvious. I'll leave it at that.

    Ch 237 System
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  • FreshMelon
    FreshMelon2yr
    に返信 GOD_OF_ENAS

    Thanks for the review (?)

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  • FreshMelon
    FreshMelon2yr
    に返信 _Felix_

    yes.

    Rewen saw that the "Race" in his stats had changed. The writing had changed from white to yellow and there was a glowing word - "perks". He tapped on it.
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  • FreshMelon
    FreshMelon2yr
    に返信 Kaito_Haruki

    Great review. The first major arc is reaching the climax. It has honestly been a little rough for me since sometimes I was out of my city and had to write down on my phone. But everything worked out fine because of the support I'm getting from readers like yourself! Have a nice day as well as a nice read, mate.

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  • FreshMelon
    FreshMelon2yr
    に返信 dear_insanity

    Missed it. Thanks!

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  • FreshMelon
    FreshMelon2yr
    に返信 PonjuPonju

    I know I'm late but he's my favorite US president.

    "I'm good. Where is Ron?"
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  • FreshMelon
    FreshMelon2yr
    に返信 ProfessorofCulture

    cursed. Now it's stuck in my head.

    "Slurpslurpslurp! Damn, the tea hits hard."
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  • FreshMelon
    FreshMelon2yr
    に返信 OPRamenGuy

    how much would you understand if you didnt know he had a family?

    Ch 8 The Virtual World
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  • FreshMelon
    FreshMelon2yr
    に返信 Ancient_Egyptian

    You can look forward to the 10 or 12 chaps after chap 155. They are light-hearted. I like writing light plots but I feel that takes some depth from the story. After this arc, the tone will become more cheerful. I will also focus on romance in the next arc.

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  • FreshMelon
    FreshMelon2yr
    に返信 Ancient_Egyptian

    You are absolutely spot on about world-building. I rarely give enough details unless it's important to the mc.

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