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Shlok_Vas

Shlok_Vas

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Newbie writer. Trying to learn...

2020-10-30 入りましたIndia
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  • Shlok_Vas
    Shlok_Vas3yr
    に返信 MaxAmx

    i don't plan to do that

    Ch 7 Exam Begins
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  • Shlok_Vas
    Shlok_Vas3yr
    に返信 LuffyLucy

    he was getting his ass handed to him with every punch so how can you expect him having fun

    I replied sarcastically.
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  • Shlok_Vas
    Shlok_Vas3yr
    に返信 Houraji

    well his cultivation level was lower than the other so he should be happy because he won the bet even though it was due to pure luck.

    Hearing that, the boy started hesitating, but Ho Chen was not the one who would hesitate before doing anything. He suddenly came and punched the boy with his punch the boy got thrown out of the arena and got eliminated. Even though I could feel that Ho Chen tried his best not to eliminate him but since the boy was weak in my comparison and Ho Chen body adapted itself to use the power to fight me he was not able to hold back much and to add more the boy was already standing on the edge he didn't have a place backside to move.
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  • Shlok_Vas
    Shlok_Vas3yr
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    I guess this line has some mistake.

    この段落は削除されました。
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  • Shlok_Vas
    Shlok_Vas3yr
    に返信 LuffyLucy

    Actually he got too full of himself when his master said that he could win against Ho Chen after using his full power and this is the result

    I am so dead...
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  • Shlok_Vas
    Shlok_Vas3yr
    に返信 LuffyLucy

    that line is my favourite one as well

    "Ho Chen, come. I will show you strength is not everything in this world that works with the rule of survival of the fittest."
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  • Shlok_Vas
    Shlok_Vas3yr
    に返信 LuffyLucy

    thanks i will rectify it

    この段落は削除されました。
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  • Shlok_Vas
    Shlok_Vas3yr
    に返信 BRPever

    Thanks for the review, I will try my best to improve this.

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  • Shlok_Vas
    Shlok_Vas3yr
    に返信 DavidDarllan

    Thanks

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  • Shlok_Vas
    Shlok_Vas3yr
    に返信 Aman_as

    Thanks

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  • Shlok_Vas
    Shlok_Vas3yr
    に返信 LuffyLucy

    Thanks bro will try to make it as interesting as possible

    Ch 1 BEGINNING
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