ScrambledEgg

Sorry, I don't understand, maybe other people able to appreciate your story more than me. From the first ch everything is strange, Author want to make a revenge story with a prolog similar to "the rising of shield hero" when every chara betray MC, but the pace of the story just to fast and the plot of the story is strange. Suddenly Rias ask him for a date, Suddenly Rias accuses mc for R, Suddenly everyone that care about mc betray him, Suddenly his sister dating other, Suddenly other people come back to normal, Suddenly mc have a behind the scenes enemy, Suddenly his sister remember and realized that she got brainwashed. I know that Author wants to make a revenge story, but using a plot devices character that able to brainwashed all the chara from the start of the story is f***up. It's ok if the one that betray MC are his friend and Rias, they want to get rid of him and makes that plan, ok and reasonable. But author includes mc sisters and other that care about him, it just to sudden that kinda unreasonable. Not to mention that author suddenly introduced Mc older sister in that plot. Even after that Rias and other chara act like nothing happen. It just strange and messed up, i'm confused and i don't understand about what happen in the story.

This story became too complicated, almost all champion became Mc enemies. Team rocket Giovanni, Lance and Lolerei that have tendency to became villain, Lusamine from Aether foundation, and now Johto Alliance, Celestial Family with Cynthia and Devon Corporations with Steven. Mc is OP but making all of that champion became a villain and mc enemies doesn't sound right

Ice Blade Leopard? Do you mean Chien Pao?

Sode no shirayuki for Ur, so Murcielago for Mira and Kyoka Suigetsu for Mavis?

Isn't the SP fluctuate too much? The last time he fought Black Cat Crew, he got a lot of SP from his new combine attacks, the gum gum bara pistol alone gives him 400 Sp, but now he only have 400 SP. How? After that battle he never copy or synthesis any skill, from more than 1200 Sp down to 400 sp, how can his Sp disappear like that

Not bad, but too much info dump. It's like reading some wikipedia or fandom. The info dump just too long and have nothing to do with the main plot. From ch 2 to 5 or 6, almost 80% of the ch just some description. After that, instead starting with To Love Ru plot, author write about Bento war. The actual plot started at ch 10 or 11. So if someone wants to avoid the info dump, just read ch 1, skimming through until ch 10, the start reading normally at ch 11.

Well, i read some advanced ch, when he got electric badge from Vermillion gym he got nothing. The achievement from the system more strict than the usual ff, maybe he will only got one lottery when he got All kanto gym (8 badge) not for each gym.

The elctric gym leader of Paldea, i forgot her name.

Yes, only 1 heroine

It's ok, keep your good works, this ff is pretty good compared to other pokemon ff