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it's OK, the first chapters helped me get interest in the mc, but then is became all about some bdsm sex slave talk with the girls after one chapter the already in love and talking about slave to his dick stuff and what a 13 in dick with bumps it's just not enjoyable to read anymore before you have to pay.

adept?

so is she dyed in the red blood of others or hers? Then wouldnt her blood be red then not blue if it is hers

300 ch and he is only lvl 13, terrible story and drags on way to much i skipped over at least 140 chapters and didn't miss anything relevant

I think this one should be the most powerful. even your description tells you that it is??

I do like the story so far, but the thing I kinda don't like about it is the fact that they talk way too properly. I mean even the hunters sound like they are old-century novels like "I have never been graced to see such beauty" It makes it hard to truly connect with the book with unrealistic characters

I'm really liking the story so far, the only thing i hope you do is to not overdo it with all of the extra women. Maybe keep it at like 20 and just improve on their development, that would definitely make the story much better. Having to many women would make it hard to keep up and remember them all and it makes their love way to shallow

I think her being in the sovereign realm already is kinda a stretch maybe like control or even profound would be ok but her being 27 and already top power just doesn't seem right to me

not good, contradicts alot of things through out story, no depth in romance or kingdom building or well story plot in general, need proof reading i mean like "she was mad and couldnt continue eating so she stopped talking and continued eating" and this type of writing continues to happen alot throughout the story

im just not feeling this novel, he is a fire dragon maybe idk but has the bloodline and is a short blue haired guy? He is royalty maybe but his bloodline isnt as powerful? and he doesnt even have a unique element like space or time or chaos or anything that would set him apart.