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thedarkmage

thedarkmage

Lv1

I am a geek.

2020-10-12 入りましたGlobal
8.3h

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  • thedarkmage
    thedarkmage10mth
    コメント

    STOP BULLYING TATSUMI

    Ch 30 Chapter 17: Aftermath
    Saikō no Chitsujo
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  • thedarkmage
    thedarkmage10mth
    コメント

    first to comment ..yes

    Ch 27 Hiatus
    Saikō no Chitsujo
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  • thedarkmage
    thedarkmage1yr
    コメント

    this has potential to be the best arc yet❤️❤️

    "Arata-chan you meanie," she pouted, nocking an arrow and drawing her bow, a crimson mist floating around it.
    Saikō no Chitsujo
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  • thedarkmage
    thedarkmage1yr
    に返信 R_F_T_S

    thank you Rfts-nim🤲

    ChaosVerse
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  • thedarkmage
    thedarkmage2yr
    発表

    Solid start up, dialogue seems good, and the story seems to be heading toward an interesting premise. Fix your narration sha... It will continue to impede your writing style. It will keep ruining the experience

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  • thedarkmage
    thedarkmage3yr
    コメント

    Much better dialogue... The characters are well written

    Ch 2 Prologue : The Chosen
    HELLSGATE : TALES OF A DIVINE WAR
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