did the translator fall asleep on the job?

really my only complaint is that the translation is rough! But even that isn't bad just mediocre! over all congratulations on a great story!

I believe there is a typo here maybe but I believe the second use of the name "fez" should actually be "Logan" I apologize if I'm wrong

to be honest it was such a minor inconvenience as to be negligible that was just the only thing I thought that could possibly improve the writing ...ps thank for the response I think this is the first response from a writer that wasn't either outright or borderline monosyllabic

I loved this story really the only complaint I could possibly have is I feel like it needs to be proof read one more time for small typos other than that I hope there is a sequel

this book is great it's a fairly quick read but the characters are rich and Interesting with just a drop of romance just enough to say it's there with out affecting the story

A great story thats well written and easy to follow. Full of characters you want to know more about! I simply cannot wait for more. What other powers are there?

simply fantastic it's full of everything action, adventure, romance, intrigue and a TALKING crow! I'm mean come on what more could you possibly need?

more more more! can't get enough!

sometimes hard to follow yet riveting lots of twists and turns like a drug induced fever dream! feels like it could use another edit but might not need it

or grieved

grieve

catch

snot>snout

the jumps in the story were a little hard to follow and it feels like the author makes jumps and assumptions about what the reader knows far to often but the richness of the characters and the back ground development while being spotty and hard to follow really carry this story